Improve my writing
Read my setting.
Then copy it out in your best handwriting.
Could you make this into an amazing piece of writing describing Antarctica as if I had just visited there for the first time???
As I step off the boat I can smell the air. In front and all around me is white and blue. In the distance, the white mountains are bumpy and jagged.
I walk across the snow and hear many noises. My hands feel the cold and my feet are beginning to freeze.